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Old Oct 16, 2004 | 10:20 AM
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hey guys couldnt sleeps so Im tryin to find something to do...

maybe Ill just write some meaningless ****....yeah!

An Innocence lost, inside grows a frost
It keeps me awake, these memories I can’t shake.
Something in my soul, missing from the whole.
Demons from my childhood, alone there I stood.
As an adult I find, still cannot erase this in my mind.
The ones I thought so strong, falling apart all along.
unconditional love unfaded, for a little brown bottle traded.
Inside I find trust is gone, always a little harder to move on.

Slim
 
Old Oct 16, 2004 | 11:01 AM
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Slim, I never knew you were so poetic. [8D]
 
Old Oct 16, 2004 | 01:13 PM
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Profound.......Nice job
 
Old Oct 16, 2004 | 03:33 PM
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Nice Slim! I should have you write the lyrics for my songs!

Love this line! "unconditional love unfaded, for a little brown bottle traded."

hope ya get some sleep!

-T
 
Old Oct 16, 2004 | 04:35 PM
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it almost makes me wish I was at a ciber cafe listening to market jazz ,very cool.
 
Old Oct 16, 2004 | 09:03 PM
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Thanks guys, I got some sleep.

Yeah Ive always been a private poet but all my stuff makes people want to cry so I dont share...
Sometimes I just have words in my head and I cant sleep till I get them out[8D]
 
Old Oct 25, 2004 | 07:56 AM
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Well once again it eludes me!

This is a very personal one but I figure since no one on here knows the deceased it doesnt matter... its short and sweet.

My Sin

The pain I feel cause of my sin
The pain I deny sent deeper within

I cut myself purify my soul
I cut myself get out of my hole

The knife my pill
The blood my fill

Never can forgive
Nor again she live

Last audible plead
Planted miseries seed

Never can I share
A crux mine to bear
 
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