Oils
#1
06-10-2006, 03:34 AM
Oils
I wrote this article, so read on and enjoy some great info I hope.
http://www.geocities.com/kakarot1232001/art/oils.html
this article will provide a bases to stick it to the dealers and retarded workers in shops and stores.
http://www.geocities.com/kakarot1232001/art/oils.html
this article will provide a bases to stick it to the dealers and retarded workers in shops and stores.
#3
06-10-2006, 08:26 PM
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RE: Oils
Hey Yuri, I hope this doesn't come off as harsh, because it's not intended that way, but, would you like me to edit your article for spelling and syntax errors? I didn't read the whole thing, mostly because I have the attention span of a common housefly, but, it occurs to me that you're not a native english speaker. I'm sure you're better at speaking American (as opposed to English; a fine distinction, but there, nonetheless) than I'd ever be at your native tongue, but your article reads a bit difficult, at times. Not because of the information, which seems to be technically proficient, rather the spelling and syntax are sometimes a touch off...
Just thought I'd offer
Just thought I'd offer
#4
06-10-2006, 08:42 PM
RE: Oils
ORIGINAL: AWDaholic
Hey Yuri, I hope this doesn't come off as harsh, because it's not intended that way, but, would you like me to edit your article for spelling and syntax errors? I didn't read the whole thing, mostly because I have the attention span of a common housefly, but, it occurs to me that you're not a native english speaker. I'm sure you're better at speaking American (as opposed to English; a fine distinction, but there, nonetheless) than I'd ever be at your native tongue, but your article reads a bit difficult, at times. Not because of the information, which seems to be technically proficient, rather the spelling and syntax are sometimes a touch off...
Just thought I'd offer
Hey Yuri, I hope this doesn't come off as harsh, because it's not intended that way, but, would you like me to edit your article for spelling and syntax errors? I didn't read the whole thing, mostly because I have the attention span of a common housefly, but, it occurs to me that you're not a native english speaker. I'm sure you're better at speaking American (as opposed to English; a fine distinction, but there, nonetheless) than I'd ever be at your native tongue, but your article reads a bit difficult, at times. Not because of the information, which seems to be technically proficient, rather the spelling and syntax are sometimes a touch off...
Just thought I'd offer
native is Russian, secondary Hebrew. third well who counting.
I'm here in the country only 2 years, it is hard for me, sometimes I forget words also, sometimes I start speaking on all 3 languages I know.
weird.
but yes, your help would be apriciated, feel free to change as you wish.
#5
06-11-2006, 01:08 AM
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RE: Oils
I can relate, believe it or not. I speak three languages. Well, my German and Italian are getting rusty, from lack of use. Neither of them being my native language, if you don't use them... When I lived in Italy I dreamed in English, with Italian subtitles
Once, when I was in Germany, I watched a French film, in Italian, with German subtitles... REALLY! I was so confused that, by the middle of the movie, I had a headache[:@]
I'll give a once over and email you the finished article.
Once, when I was in Germany, I watched a French film, in Italian, with German subtitles... REALLY! I was so confused that, by the middle of the movie, I had a headache[:@]I'll give a once over and email you the finished article.
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